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The best advice I received in my childhood was from my dad. He always gives me some advice, But I seldom took them seriously. One day he was encouraged me to participate in a speech competition. So I signed up and after the competition, I did my best to be full prepared. But the moment I stood on the stage, I was such nervous that my mind completely went blank. The experience of lose a competition was really painful. Then, my dad said, “My son, life is like battlefield. You have to lose many time to win the final victory.” Thanks for his advice, I never give up when I do anything.

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The best advice I received in my childhood was from my dad. He always  me some advice, but I seldom took  seriously. One day he was encouraged me to participate in a speech competition. So I signed up and  the competition, I did my best to beprepared. But the moment I stood on the stage, I was  nervous that my mind completely went blank. The experience of  a competition was really painful. Then, my dad said, “My son, life is like battlefield. You have to lose many  to win the final victory.” Thanks  his advice, I never give up when I do anything.

第一处：考查时态。根据第一句的时间状语in my childhood可知是发生在过去的事，所以都用一般过去时，故gives改为gave。

第二处：考查代词。因此处是代替前面的名词advice(是不可数名词，没复数形式。)，为了避免重复，them可代替前面出现的复数名词，而it可代替前面出现的单数名词或不可数名词。故them改为it。

第三处：考查时态语态。因encourage后有宾语me，所以用主动形式，不用被动结构，即encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人干某事。故去掉was。

第四处：考查介词。根据本句的意思可知“所以我报了名，并在比赛前（before）”，我尽力做充分的准备。”可知before符合语境之意。故after改为before。

第五处：考查副词。因本空是修饰后面的动词prepare的（即做充分的准备），修饰动词要用副词。故full改为fully。

第六处：考查状语从句。因so/such…that…是结果状语从句的连词，而nervous是形容词该用so, 因so+adj./adv.+that…等;而such+(a/an)+n.(单数)/复数/不可数名词+that…。故such改为so。

第七处：考查非谓语动词。因of是介词，后加动词要用ing形式（即动名词作介词的宾语）。故lose改为losing。

第八处：考查冠词。因battlefield是可数名词，且根据句意可知该译成“生活就像一个（a/an）战场。”，有“一个”的意思就得用不定冠词，又因fightfield的第一个音素“f”是辅音，故添加a。

第九处：考查名词。根据句意 “要想赢得最终的胜利，你得输很多次（times）。”可知此处是指“次数”，time只有加“s”才可以译成“次数”。故time改为times。

第十处：考查固定搭配。根据句意“多亏（thanks to）他的建议，当我做任何事情的时候，我从来都不会放弃。”可知thanks to “幸亏，多亏”比 thanks for“因……而感谢”更符合语境之意。故for改为to。

知识点：其他

题型：短文改错