WetookpartinavoluntaryactivityorganizedbyourschoolinSun...

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We took part in a voluntary activity organized by our school in Sunday. We gathered at the Sunshine Square and gave out leaflets to passers-by, tell them the importance of environmental protection. The leaflets soon draw the attention of the public. Some of us also made a public speech to tell people some knowledges about protecting the environment. They were also told where to take action in a properly and efficient way. The voluntary activity was offered us an opportunity to contribute to our society but I have learned much from it. I think someone should be concerned about our environment and take active part in improving it.

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We took part in a voluntary activity organized by our school  Sunday. We gathered at the Sunshine Square and gave out leaflets to passers-by,  them the importance of environmental protection. The leaflets soon  the attention of the public. Some of us also made a public speech to tell people some  about protecting the environment. They were also told  to take action in a  and efficient way. The voluntary activity was offered us an opportunity to contribute to our society  I have learned much from it. I think  should be concerned about our environment and take  active part in improving it.

第一处:in→ on。 考查介词。在周日的正确表达为"on Sunday",故将in改为on。

第二处:tell →telling。 考查非谓语动词。分析句子结构可知,We与tell之间为逻辑上的主动关系,故用现在分词telling作状语。

第三处:draw →drew。 考查动词时态。本文叙述的是发生在过去的事情,故此处应用drew。

第四处:knowledges →knowledge。 考查名词。knowledge为不可数名词,没有复数形式,故用单数形式。

第五处:where →how。 考查疑问副词。下文说"用一种适当并且有效的方法",所以此处应是如何采取行动,故用方式副词how。

第六处:properly →proper。 考查形容词。此处应用形容词修饰名词way,故用proper。

第七处:去掉offered前的was。 考查语态。offer这个动作的发出者为The voluntary activity,故此处用主动语态。

第八处:but →and。 考查连词。此处表示顺承关系,不是转折关系,故用and。

第九处:someone →everyone。 考查代词。根据语境可知,此处指每个人都应该关心我们的环境,故应用everyone。someone表示"某人,有人",与语境不符。

第十处:在take后加an。 考查冠词。take an active part in 意为"积极参加",为固定短语。

知识点：其他

题型：短文改错