閲讀下面短文，根據所給情節進行續寫，使之構成一個完整的故事． MissusSommersonedayfou...

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閲讀下面短文，根據所給情節進行續寫，使之構成一個完整的故事．

Missus Sommers one day found herself the unexpected owner of fifteen dollars． It seemed to her a very large amount of money． For a day or two， she walked around in a dreamy state as she thought about her choices． Her daughter Janie was wearing worn shoes and needed new ones． She would buy cloth for new shirts for the boys． Her daughter Mag should have another dress． And still there would be enough left for new stockings for her children． The idea about how to spend the dollars made her restless with excitement．

On the day she planned to go shopping with the money， she ate a light meal﹣no!

Between getting the children fed and the house cleaned， and preparing herself to go shopping， she forgot to eat at all？

When she arrived at the large department store， she spotted a pile of silk stockings at the entrance． A sign nearby announced that they had been reduced in price． A young girl behind the counter asked her if she wished to examine the silky leg coverings． She smiled as if she had been asked to inspect diamond jewelry， and started to feel the soft， expensive items． Missus Sommers picked up a black pair and looked at them closely． Two red marks suddenly showed on her pale face． She looked up at the shop girl and said proudly， "Well， I will buy this pair．"

Missus Sommers changed her cotton stockings for the new silk ones in the ladies' rest area． She had let herself be controlled by some machine﹣like force that directed her actions and freed her of responsibility． How good was the touch of the silk on her skin! Then she put her shoes back on and put her old stockings into her bag． Next， she went to the shoe department， where she tried on a pair of new boots． Her foot and ankle looked lovely． She could not believe that they were a part of herself．

注意

1．所續寫短文的詞數應為150左右；

2．至少使用5個短文中標有下劃線的關鍵詞語；

3．續寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；

4．續寫完成後，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關鍵詞語

Paragraph 1

After buying a pair of new boots， she walked into the clothing department．_______________

Paragraph 2

She was about to leave the store when a kid running around reminded her of something．___________

【回答】

【解答】Paragraph1：

After buying a pair of new boots， she walked into the clothing department． Coming to a dressing mirror， looking at herself in the mirror， "Won't I look more beautiful if my shoe matches a perfect dress on my body？" thought Missus Sommers． She waving to the salesgirl of the department and asked her whether she could try on the fashionable dress styles． Her request was approved， Missus Sommers kept trying on． One dress after another tried on， she put them into her shopping cart fondly．（ Missus Sommers一直在商店試穿衣服，放進購物車裏）

Paragraph2：

She was about to leave the store when a kid running around reminded her of something． "Oh， My God! I forgot all about my kids!"yelled Missus Sommers， starting to blame herself． "Excuse me， salesgirl， would you be so kind as to let me put back all I had chosen， for I had intended to buy my daughter Janie a new pair of shoes， boy's new shirts and all of them new stockings？ I must have lost my head!" A sense of responsibility of caring about her kids drove her to think of the right idea where the money should go．（ Missus Sommers想起來要給孩子買東西）

【分析】高分句型一：After her request was approved， Missus Sommers kept trying on．

譯文：在她的請求被批准後，Sommers太太繼續嘗試．運用時間狀語從句．

分析：after引導時間狀語從句．

高分句型二：Although she really liked these clothes， a sense of responsibility of caring about herkids drove her to think of the right idea where the money should go．

譯文：雖然她真的很喜歡這些衣服，但是一種照顧孩子的責任感驅使她去想錢應該花在哪裏．

分析：although引導讓步狀語從句．

【點評】解題方法點撥

（1）品讀原文．確定文章線索

每篇文章都有各自獨特的寫作思路，通過精讀文章，找到該篇文章的寫作線索．如是以時間為線索還是以空間為線索等這樣有利於號生"順藤摸瓜（結尾）"．

（2）仔細審題，明確續寫要求

一般短文後面的"注意"都有對此次短文縷寫的具體要求，如詞數限制使用幾處標有下劃線的關鍵詞語．續寫段落的首句提示，這樣考生可以做到"心中有數"．

（3）回扣原文，揣摩續寫思路

根據文章後面的要求，再次快速回讀短文，抓住文章的思路結合段首的提示語最終確定續寫段落的思路．同時結合文章畫線詞語提示，確定續寫段落的內容．

（4）擬寫草稿，修改錯詞病句

在確定了思路和內容之後．最關鍵的就是結合提示語或者文中畫線的關鍵詞擬寫草稿．擬寫時，注意句子結構的多樣*，語言的豐富*，並通過句與句之間連接詞的正確使用，使上下文連貫．

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