改错：(2020·安徽省六安市毛坦厂中学东城校区高三模拟)Sunny31st,JulyItwassunnyto...

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改错：(2020·安徽省六安市毛坦厂中学东城校区高三模拟)

Sunny 31st, July

It was sunny today and I was in a good mood. Tired of studying or the noise of city life, I come to the ecology park to enjoy scenery and get relaxing in the afternoon. While I arrived at the park, what came into its sight were the thick green trees. The air was fresh. In addition, I could clearly see a path around the pond. Lying on the grasses decorated with various flowers, I felt with ease because all that I wanted was peace inside.

Therefore, with time going by quickly, the sun was setting in the west. So I had to return back home. I would never forget such romantic experience, which was really beyond description.

【回答】

【解析】→and　考查连词。学习和城市生活的喧嚣是并列关系，故将or改为and。

→came　考查动词的时态。根据第一句可知，描述过去发生的事情，用一般过去时。故将come改为came。

xing→relaxed　考查形容词。根据语境可知，此处指“我”要放松。故将relaxing改为relaxed。

e→When　考查状语从句的连接词。while “当……的时候”，相当于during the time that，引导时间状语从句，后面常跟时间段，when “当……的时候”，引导时间状语从句，既可跟时间点也可跟时间段。故将While改为When。

→my　考查代词。句意：当我到达公园，进入我视野的是茂盛的绿树。此处表示“我的视野”，故将its改为my。

ses→grass　考查名词。grass指“草坪”时，是不可数名词。故将grasses改为grass。

→at　考查介词。at ease “安逸，舒适”是固定搭配，故将with改为at。

efore→However　考查副词。上文阐述“我”在生态公园里，躺在长满鲜花的草坪上，感到舒适。下文阐述时间过得很快，我必须回家了，前后之间是转折关系，故将Therefore改为However。

9.去掉back　考查动词。return表示“返回”，back是重复表达，故去掉back。

ntic前加a　考查冠词。experience表示“经历”时，是可数名词，此处泛指“一次经历”；such＋a/an＋adj.＋n. (单数)是常用搭配。故在romantic前加a。

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题型：短文改错