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Dick is an Australian man, aged at 25, whose life is full of hardships. He was born without arms and legs. He used to be made fun by others. Everything seemed impossible to them. However, Dick never gave up. After many failure, he finally learned to swim, fish and even surf. That surprised us most is that he completed university education and get two degrees. And now he is the CEO of two companies. When asking about the secret of his success, he thinks a positive attitude is a key to success. Dick’s story greatly inspired me. Compared with him, we are health. However, we are always frustrated when we face difficulties. I think Dick have set a good example to us. We should learn from him and never give up.

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Dick is an Australian man, aged at 25, whose life is full of hardships. He was born without arms and legs. He used to be made funby others. Everything seemed impossible to . However, Dick never gave r many , he finally learned to swim, fish and even surf.  surprised us most is that he completed university education and  two degrees. And now he is the CEO of two companies. When  about the secret of his success, he thinks a positive attitude is  key to success. Dick’s story greatly inspired me. Compared with him, we are . However, we are always frustrated when we face difficulties. I think Dick  set a good example to us. We should learn from him and never give up.

第一处:删去at。aged为形容词,其后可直接跟数字表示"……岁"。

第二处:在fun后加of。make fun of"取笑"为固定搭配,用于被动时,不能去掉of。

第三处:them →him。此处表示的是对他来说,一切似乎都是不可能的。故应改为him。

第四处:failure →failures。此处failure是可数名词,表示"失败的事";再根据前面的"many"可知应用其复数形式。

第五处:That →What。分析句子结构可知,What在句中引导主语从句,且在从句中作主语。注意:that引导名词*从句时,在从句中不充当句子成分。

第六处:get →got。由前文的"completed university education and"可知,此处也应用一般过去时。

第七处:asking →asked。ask与其逻辑主语he之间是动宾关系,故应使用过去分词形式。此处是状语从句的省略,相当于When he was asked...。

第八处:a→ the。the key to..."……的关键",为固定用法。

第九处:health →healthy。此处应用形容词作表语。

第十处:have →has。句子的主语为Dick,故谓语动词应用第三人称单数。

知识点：其他

题型：短文改错