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When we have different opinion on organizing class activities, what should we do to deal with a situation? As for me, if I have a better idea, I will choose to stick to it. Do so, I can share good ideas with others. Besides, it’s possibly for me to learn to express myself clearly. Once we were discussing whether to go for an outing. Most of classmates wanted to go to a park, but I thought different: why not go to the countryside? Late, I persuaded them into accepting my idea. We have a good time that day. Good opinions are worth sticking to because they can benefit from us all.

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When we have different on organizing class activities, what should we do to deal with  situation? As for me, if I have a better idea, I will choose to stick to it.  so, I can share good ideas with others. Besides, it’s for me to learn to express myself clearly. Once we were discussingto go for an outing. Most ofclassmates wanted to go to a park, but I thought: why not go to the countryside?, I persuaded them into accepting my idea. We a good time that day. Good opinions are worth sticking to because they can benefit  from  us all.

第一处:opinion →opinions。different暗示不止一种观点,故用opinion的复数形式。

第二处:a →the。当我们对组织班级活动有不同的观点时,我们应该怎么处理这种情况呢?根据语境可知,这里的situation特指从句提到的那种情况,故用定冠词the。

第三处:Do →Doing。分析句子结构可知,逗号前面是非谓语动词作方式状语,do与I之间是逻辑上的主谓关系,故用现在分词。

第四处:possibly →possible。此外,我还可能学会清楚地表达自我。本句是It is possible (for sb.) to do sth .句型,应该用形容词possible"可能的"作表语。

第五处:whether →where。根据下文中的"wanted to go to a park" "go to the countryside"可知,这里是在讨论到哪里去郊游,而不是是否去郊游。故用where。

第六处:classmates前加my。我的大部分同学都想去公园,但是我有不同的想法。此处指"我的同学",要加上形容词*物主代词my以使语义更加明确。

第七处:different→ differently。但是我的想法不同:为什么不去乡村呢?修饰谓语动词要用副词形式。

第八处:Late→ Later。late表示"迟,接近末期",later表示"稍后,随后"。此处指"随后我说服他们接受我的想法"。故later符合语境。

第九处:have →had。根据上文可知,此处描述的是发生在过去的事情,故用一般过去时。

第十处:去掉from。好的主张值得坚持,因为它们能使我们所有人受益。benefit from表示"从……受益";benefit sb.表示"使某人受益"。

知识点：其他

题型：短文改错