现在的科技日新月异,各种发明以及高科技产品成为了我们生活中不可缺少的一部分,如电脑、笔记本电脑(laptop)...
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现在的科技日新月异,各种发明以及高科技产品成为了我们生活中不可缺少的一部分,如电脑、笔记本电脑(laptop)、手机(mobile phone)、平板电脑(iPad)、数码相机(digital camera)等。请结合自己的经历来描述你最喜欢的一种发明,以及你喜欢该发明的理由。
要求:1. 词数不少于80词;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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【写作思路】
考生要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题,确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。首先要阐明自己的观点,选择自己最喜欢的一种发明,然后根据英文要点提示,阐述喜欢这种发明的理由,时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主,同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯*。温馨提醒:考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【参考范文】
Among all the modern inventions, laptop is my favorite one. I think it is the most amazing invention in the 21st century.
With a laptop, I can work, study and entertain everywhere. A laptop can enable me to get the latest information whenever I want. Besides, I can keep in touch with my friends and family through e-mail and QQ at any time and in any place.
I used to study in a faraway place, so I always felt lonely and missed my family and friends very much. But since I got my laptop, I could chat with them and even see them every day.
I really like my laptop. I think in the future, everybody will have his or her own laptop.
【写作亮点】
重点短语:Among all the modern inventions 在所有的现代发明中;get the latest information 获取最新消息;get to the Internet 上网。
高分句型:
1. I think it is the most amazing invention in the 21 st century. 我认为它是21世纪最让人感到惊异的发明. (I think后面跟宾语从句)
2. I can keep in touch with my friends and family through e-mails and QQ at any time and in any place 我可以通过电子邮件和QQ随时随地于朋友家人保持联系。(keep in touch with和…保持联系)
知识点:其他
题型:书面表达
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