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假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的一下作文。文*有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），並在其下寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多餘的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，並在該詞下面寫出修改後的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不計分。

Peter Judd joined in the army when he was eighteen, and for several months he was teaching how to be a good soldier. He did quite well in everything besides shooting. One day he and his friends were practising their shooting, and both all of them were doing quite well except Peter. After he has shot at the target nine times and had not hit it once, the officer was trying to teach the young soldiers to shoot said, “You’re quite hopeless. Peter! Don’t waste your last Bullet, too! Go behind that wall and shoot you with it! Peter felt ashamed. He went behind the wall, and a few seconds late, the officer and the other soldiers heard the sound of a shot. But Peter was all right. “I’m sorry, sir.” He said, “and I missed again.”

【回答】

1. Peter Judd joined in the army

【*】去掉in【試題解析】參*要用join the army.

2. and for several months he was teaching how to be a good soldier

【*】teaching改為taught【試題解析】被動語態“被教會”

3. He did quite well in everything besides shooting.

【*】besides改為except【試題解析】besides除了..還有...，except除了..之外，此處為“除了*擊，他做的都很好”

4. and both all of them were doing quite well except Peter。

【*】去掉both 【試題解析】所有人為all of them ,both為多餘項。

5. After he has shot at the target nine times and had not hit it once,

【*】has改為had【試題解析】全文時態都為過去時，故用had.

6. the officer ∧ was trying to teach the young soldiers to shoot said,