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人生中有很多第一次:第一次学游泳;第一次跟家人外出旅行;第一次做家务;第一次赢得比赛;第一次……。请根据提示,...

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人生中有很多第一次:第一次学游泳;第一次跟家人外出旅行;第一次做家务;第一次赢得比赛;第一次……。请根据提示,...

人生中有很多第一次:第一次学游泳;第一次跟家人外出旅行;第一次做家务;第一次赢得比赛;第一次……。请根据提示,就你的第一次……写一篇短文。 内容包括:

1.  第一次……的整个过程;

2.  你的感受。 要求:

1.  词数:80 —100(开头已给出,不计入总词数);

2.  文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。

As we all know, everyone has his unforgettable memories. I still remember the first time       

   

       

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The first time to learn to swim

As we all know, everyone has his unforgettable memories. I still remember the first time to learn to swim.

Last summer vacation, my father took me to the swimming pool in our neighborhood and taught me to swim. It was the first for me to swim. At first, I could not swim at all. My father was very patient. He encouraged me and taught me how to swim. He taught me how to breathe in the water first. Then, He threw me into the deepest part of the swimming pool, I was so frightened that I couldn’t move. But I never gave up, I felt safe with my dad around. Three hours later, with the help of my father, I could swim by myself. Although I couldn't swim very well, I was very happy.

I will never forget this experience, because I not only learned how to swim, but also learned to be brave!

【解析】这是一篇材料作文,根据提示信息,选择给你印象深刻的第一次活动进行描述并谈谈自己的感受。时态主要为一般过去时,人称主要为第一、三人称。写作思路:考生需要首先审清主题,围绕主题展开作文。首先开门见山,介绍自己的第一次活动是什么,接下来详细介绍第一次活动的整个过程,最后谈一谈自己的感受。写作中适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系,表达具有条理*。注意: 注意紧扣主题,意思连贯,语言通顺,书写规范,避免出现拼写错误;词数在80—100。

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