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阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事．

Missus Sommers one day found herself the unexpected owner of fifteen dollars． It seemed to her a very large amount of money． For a day or two， she walked around in a dreamy state as she thought about her choices． Her daughter Janie was wearing worn shoes and needed new ones． She would buy cloth for new shirts for the boys． Her daughter Mag should have another dress． And still there would be enough left for new stockings for her children． The idea about how to spend the dollars made her restless with excitement．

On the day she planned to go shopping with the money， she ate a light meal﹣no!

Between getting the children fed and the house cleaned， and preparing herself to go shopping， she forgot to eat at all？

When she arrived at the large department store， she spotted a pile of silk stockings at the entrance． A sign nearby announced that they had been reduced in price． A young girl behind the counter asked her if she wished to examine the silky leg coverings． She smiled as if she had been asked to inspect diamond jewelry， and started to feel the soft， expensive items． Missus Sommers picked up a black pair and looked at them closely． Two red marks suddenly showed on her pale face． She looked up at the shop girl and said proudly， "Well， I will buy this pair．"

Missus Sommers changed her cotton stockings for the new silk ones in the ladies' rest area． She had let herself be controlled by some machine﹣like force that directed her actions and freed her of responsibility． How good was the touch of the silk on her skin! Then she put her shoes back on and put her old stockings into her bag． Next， she went to the shoe department， where she tried on a pair of new boots． Her foot and ankle looked lovely． She could not believe that they were a part of herself．

注意

1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语

Paragraph 1

After buying a pair of new boots， she walked into the clothing department．_______________

Paragraph 2

She was about to leave the store when a kid running around reminded her of something．___________

【回答】

【解答】Paragraph1：

After buying a pair of new boots， she walked into the clothing department． Coming to a dressing mirror， looking at herself in the mirror， "Won't I look more beautiful if my shoe matches a perfect dress on my body？" thought Missus Sommers． She waving to the salesgirl of the department and asked her whether she could try on the fashionable dress styles． Her request was approved， Missus Sommers kept trying on． One dress after another tried on， she put them into her shopping cart fondly．（ Missus Sommers一直在商店试穿衣服，放进购物车里）

Paragraph2：

She was about to leave the store when a kid running around reminded her of something． "Oh， My God! I forgot all about my kids!"yelled Missus Sommers， starting to blame herself． "Excuse me， salesgirl， would you be so kind as to let me put back all I had chosen， for I had intended to buy my daughter Janie a new pair of shoes， boy's new shirts and all of them new stockings？ I must have lost my head!" A sense of responsibility of caring about her kids drove her to think of the right idea where the money should go．（ Missus Sommers想起来要给孩子买东西）

【分析】高分句型一：After her request was approved， Missus Sommers kept trying on．

译文：在她的请求被批准后，Sommers太太继续尝试．运用时间状语从句．

分析：after引导时间状语从句．

高分句型二：Although she really liked these clothes， a sense of responsibility of caring about herkids drove her to think of the right idea where the money should go．

译文：虽然她真的很喜欢这些衣服，但是一种照顾孩子的责任感驱使她去想钱应该花在哪里．

分析：although引导让步状语从句．

【点评】解题方法点拨

（1）品读原文．确定文章线索

每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索．如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于号生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"．

（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求

一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文缕写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语．续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"．

（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路

根据文章后面的要求，再次快速回读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路．同时结合文章画线词语提示，确定续写段落的内容．

（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句

在确定了思路和内容之后．最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿．拟写时，注意句子结构的多样*，语言的丰富*，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯．

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