改错：ThemomentIsteppedinhighschool,Ihavemadeupmymindtostu...

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改错：The moment I stepped in high school, I have made up my mind to study hard for the purpose of entering the good university. In the first year, I made a lot of new friends, all of who were so excellent. I felt great pressure during the second year. My scores went up or down and I felt so worrying. I told me that I needed relaxation. Listen to music was a good way. Besides, I would like talk with my friends, because they understood me. We would have some tea in the shop and then share secret. When we laughed out happy, all the annoyance would disappear.

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【解析】1．去掉have　考查动词的时态。根据前面“The moment I stepped in”可知应该用一般过去时。

2．the→a'考查冠词。此处表示“一所好的学校”，是泛指。

3．who→whom'考查定语从句的引导词。前面有of，故用who的宾格形式whom。

4．or→and'考查连词。up and down“上上下下”，固定用法。

5．worrying→worried'考查形容词。表示人“担心的”用worried。

6．me→myself'考查反身代词。此处表示“我告诉我自己”用反身代词myself。

7．Listen→Listening'考查非谓语动词。动名词作主语用Listening。

8．talk前加to　考查固定用法。would like to do意为“想做某事”。

9．secret→secrets'考查名词。secret是可数名词，此处指“分享秘密”用复数形式。

10．happy→happily'考查副词。修饰动词laugh要用副词happily。

知识点：其他

题型：短文改错