假定英语老师课上要求同桌之间修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加...

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假定英语老师课上要求同桌之间修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线(___),并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词; 2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Although all the students seem very happily at our school, as far as we are concerning, the buildings would be more beautiful if the school could be decorated. We students thought the school looks like a desert and the concrete walls like the grey sky in a rainy day. We could be much happier and are able to study better if the walls of the school could be decorated with posters, photos and paintings, that could certainly broaden our horizons and enrich our lives. Original art works are too expensive, but unless we buy art posters, the cost will be low. Using only little money, it can make our school a nicer place.

【回答】

  改错：happily-happy  concerning-concerned  thought-think  in a rainy day-on

 are去掉或者改为be  that-which  work-works  unless-if  a little  it-we

知识点：其他

题型：短文改错