假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同以写的以下作文。文*有10处语言错误，每句中最多有...

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    假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同以写的以下作文。文*有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处错误。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧ )，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线（)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线 (    ），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

      2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11,处起)不计分。

      When  I was small,my parents were such busy that they had no time look after a result,Ispent most of my childhood on my

grandparents.I really enjoyed playwith my year,when my grandfather passes away,I felt a deep r,I  decided  to do something in the honor of my beloved I started making a short tells a story of a small boy and her short film is very touching and loving by many people.I think it's my love for my grandfather which make it so touching.

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知识点：其他

题型：短文改错